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04 September 2005 @ 09:11 am
 
Hey! This is the NejiTen drabble which I've told some of you about (I think). So, please read and leave a review or comment here?

Title: Caught in the Moment- By the river
Status: Complete
Rating: K+ (that's the max.)
Summery: An oath…and its loophole; they were just who they were. Nothing else. NejiTen. NaruHina. ShikaIno
Teaser: There was nothing soft or romantic about the relationship they shared. At least, Tenten didn't think so...

( Caught in the Moment- By the river )

I hope you'll like it!
 
 
Current Mood: bouncybouncy
 
 
 
GeeBee: Neji Fate [Naruto]goldberry on September 3rd, 2005 05:22 pm (UTC)
I very much enjoyed the imagery in this. *sighs happily and adds to her memories*
Only Secretonly_secret on September 4th, 2005 03:42 am (UTC)
*bilnk blink*...*squeals*

Thank you for reading this piece. It's such an honor to have one of the best NejiTen authoress out there to acknowledge my work! *goes into admiring fangirl mode* Wow. Lots of thanks!
Al'angstyalex on September 4th, 2005 05:17 am (UTC)
XDDDD Only_secret makes me giggle.
Only Secretonly_secret on September 6th, 2005 02:19 am (UTC)
I do? That's a good thing, right? *decides it's a good thing anyways.*
Spiffyxx_spiffy_xx on September 4th, 2005 10:18 pm (UTC)
I love this.

...And I can't think of anything else to say. XD It's beautiful, indepth, and so detailed. The ending took my heart.
Only Secretonly_secret on September 6th, 2005 02:28 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. I would say I liked it too...but it would be unfair since I'm the one who wrote it, I'm bound to like it one way or antoher.

But thank you for thinking so highly of this.
Kite: kakashi receives a big onefiredragonbl on September 7th, 2005 01:19 am (UTC)
lol not all authors like their works ^ ^ some of my own work i hated...but i kept posted for a bit because some people wanted to read them...i deleted them though XD after i reread it and renewed the reason why i hated it XDXD
lol i really liked your story ^ ^ it perfectly describes tenten and neji's relationship ^ ^ though it provides a decent amount ot write off of...
you could startanother story just with this...^ ^
~Kite~
sahara stormsahara_storm on October 27th, 2005 08:32 am (UTC)
Awww.... that was really sweet. It was a perfect interpretation of their relationship. You did a really good job! :-)
Only Secretonly_secret on October 27th, 2005 09:25 am (UTC)
Thand you for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it and didn't think their relationship portrayed a bit 'bare' and 'stark'