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30 June 2008 @ 03:16 am
CHILDHOOD CONTEST ENTRY  
Yo!

Last-minute-entry-no jutsu!  I had my mind all set on not entering until a little more than three hours ago, but then got utterly sick of my textbooks and gave myself up to the Nejiten smexiness.  Please be gentle, for it is terribly rushed and I have Not Been Doing What I Was Supposed To Be Doing a.k.a. studying because of this. 

Link to ff.net.

 
 
 
wordynessiewordynessie on June 30th, 2008 03:39 am (UTC)
Loooooooooooved it, darling! It was so sad and for a minute scary, but it was beautiful at the same time. You can turn a phrase like no other. Yaaay!
Icarussun_myths on June 30th, 2008 04:22 am (UTC)
Thank you Nessie! I think I've written quite enough sad fic to last many angsty lifetimes now, so it's gotta be CRACK next. What about you? I've missed reading your writing; I know you're working on your original for now but I hope you'll still produce some naruto fic for us to fangirl/boy over, soon?
wordynessiewordynessie on June 30th, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
I still get ideas, and I'm sure once the summer ends my original's muse will go into hibernation but it's nice while she's here. ^_^ And I am working on the group project, which I'm hoping will debut sooner rather than later.
A k i r ahimehikari on June 30th, 2008 09:04 am (UTC)
This is super wonderful. I find it a bit disturbing with the blood and meat thingy but the whole story is done beautifully~
Icarussun_myths on July 1st, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
Yes, I remember getting quite creeped out when I first read about it in a Chinese classical play or something.....but then again filial piety was SUPER SERIUZ BIZNEZZ. Thanks anyway! :D
"Mea irs here aulla omnis": plueeshtar on June 30th, 2008 02:55 pm (UTC)
Nyuuaaaaa~!!! I don't know why, but it's probably me. It seems like it's been quite sometime since the last time you make something. I miss your work a lot!! ^^ And I love you for making this!! You are one of those irreplaceable writers in my top list. ^^ *hugs* Your words are like, WHOA!

Good luck!
Icarussun_myths on July 1st, 2008 02:17 am (UTC)
Hmm...I posted a quick cracky drabble here a short while ago but it was purely for fun and so very badly written. University and exams have been sucking all my time for Serious Fic.....so now that the summer holidays are finally here I can spam you all mercilessly with my stuff. :D Thank you so much for the kind words!
wingsover: Yashi-kun Hyuuga Hiashi clanhead strongewingsover on July 1st, 2008 06:54 am (UTC)
.....I feel no longer so alone. There are others in my position! *huggles* Oh, did I forget to mention I adore this piece? Neji being cute! Tenten being cute! The angst, seasoning the cuteness to come!

...and there's HIZASHIIIII! *dies dies DIES* ...I totally thought he was there to 'visit' Tenten's aunt for more - ahhh - personal reasons, at first, y'know. 'm evil. :P

*loves loves loves on fic*
Icarussun_myths on July 1st, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
Well y'know...he SAYS he's there for the tarot but they could totally have been playing footsie under the kitchen table during every reading....Aunt: I see a lot of....unbearable pleasure.....in your future, Hyuuga-sama....if you know what I mean. Hizashi: *gulps*

Heh but yeah the idea of "personal visits" definitely occurred to me too, 'cept that would have made it even more uber angsty in a MY FATHER CHEATED ON MY MOTHER WITH YOUR AUNT kind of way (and then of course I'd have to somehow reveal the aunt as Tenten's own mother and blah blah blah).

I was actually afraid to write Hizashi because of you! XD You write him and Hiashi so incredibly, heartbreakingly well. I was like GAH he is going to look so terribly boring next to wingsover's interpretation *flails*. So I'm very glad you like the fic, hee~
Icarussun_myths on July 1st, 2008 11:28 pm (UTC)
And by the way WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN???
wingsoverwingsover on July 2nd, 2008 01:27 am (UTC)
Ummmmm.....where have YOU been? *tries to be defensive, ends up being sheepish*

BTW. I am dying, dying DYING over that comment above. "I foresee - unbearable pleasure."

Hizashi: *stares*

"In a bed." (just in case the Hyuuga doesn't get it)

.......omg, a previous-generation connection. And it wouldn't have to be cheating....Hizashi's wife could be dead, she certainly never shows up......
wingsover: Yashi-kun Hyuuga Hiashi clanhead strongewingsover on July 2nd, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
And oh! I forgot to react to the unbearably nice compliment you paid me above. *purrs and preens* I ended up loving the Hyuuga twins, some of my RP partners say I love them more than Neji (which isn't true but ....I do feel less need to torture them) but I always fear I write them - unrealistically. Too close for canon. I loved YOUR insights into Hizashi. It totally makes sense that someone who raised a fate-obsessed son would be into tarot readings, and I love your Hizashi's quiet dignity at the end, and..... just SQUEE over him, I really do.