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25 April 2005 @ 09:06 pm
Oh my god, never make me do that again. 14 pages.

Yes, primarily Nejiten, but it's got some other couples too.

How to Bake a Cake.

^^;; Lemme know what you guys think. I typed it when I was half-dead...
Current Mood: complacentcomplacent
lacusnin on April 26th, 2005 04:48 am (UTC)
I have reviewed as moonlightpath on ffnet...but wouldn't hurt to do it here neh?
Anyways, I love this fic!
Once again, I'm adding this to my nejiten C2!!! :) Smilies all around! Even I couldn't write NejiTen fic like you!
Nice jobbie. ;D
Kia: holding outstarswing on April 26th, 2005 09:08 pm (UTC)
^^;; You are WAY too nice.
hyugatentenhyugatenten on April 27th, 2005 01:25 am (UTC)
Ok, even if i'm against McDonalds...

~badabababa! I'm loving it!~

Sorry. But i really really really do love the story. Good job!
miscellany: Tenten is Athena.celira on April 27th, 2005 01:41 am (UTC)

I commented on FF.Net too, 'coz I was bored. XD
Kia: cute as PIE by Bonnie <3starswing on April 27th, 2005 04:33 am (UTC)
You...are...so incredibly NICE. *reading review* ;.; I'm so happy you liked it!
miscellanycelira on April 27th, 2005 01:29 pm (UTC)
no problem at all! ^^ 'Tisn't often that you find very good writing in a fandom this huge-normous. X3 And as a writer myself, I'm impressed that you wrote 14 pages for a one-shot~ I've not written that much in, uh, months XD;
Kia: Mine!- by dotakapipstarswing on April 28th, 2005 12:40 am (UTC)
XD That's mostly because I have to have SOMETHING to do in class.

My writing's very good? o.o Oh my god, you're so frickin' niiiice...
miscellany: Urahara- oh thoppit.celira on April 28th, 2005 01:00 am (UTC)
Yes, it -is- good! ^^ You keep everyone mostly in character, which is, like I said, far more than can be said for some~ ♥

Oh, I envy you for not having anything to do in class. So much envy. XD;;
REKINOshyunpo on April 28th, 2005 07:31 am (UTC)
I'm pretty sure I reviewed... but I'll say it again; I loved it! XD
Kia: COOLNESSstarswing on April 28th, 2005 09:43 pm (UTC)
XD You did and I am VERY grateful.

Plus, I'm also working on your one-shot. XP
the girl you met in the coin laundry.rocketpop on April 30th, 2005 03:29 am (UTC)
^__^ ADORED it!!!! I hope you keep writing! [and you so rule for adding that SasuSaku sweetness. And the ShikaTema]
Kia: ph34rstarswing on April 30th, 2005 03:34 am (UTC)
Awww, thank you! ^^;;