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08 August 2006 @ 04:59 am
Over The Years update  
Just dropped by to say that I've updated 'Over the Years', that Neji birthday fic which is way past his birthday by now, and I've put a bunch of cameos in it for fun. Hope you enjoy reading it! ^_^

Chapter Five
He, Neji, was perfectly capable of fending off any stupid (he actually was agitated enough to use the adjective) fangirls if Tenten wasn’t.
 
 
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shawnywshawnyw on August 8th, 2006 12:57 pm (UTC)
I love this fic! As for the cameos, I only regonize two (Heero & Relena of Gundam Wing). Hmm... Heero as an undercover Hyuuga. It's an interesting concept... *plot bunny hops around*
wingsoverwingsover on August 8th, 2006 03:11 pm (UTC)
Hey, you were the first one to recognize the GW characters. :)
(Anonymous) on August 8th, 2006 01:28 pm (UTC)
Finally! Of to read
tam_atmtam_atm on August 8th, 2006 05:18 pm (UTC)
yay new chappie ^_^
I didn't notice the gundam wing one at first ... the first oen I noticed was the Takato from digimon tamers cameo xD hahaha the bread :P... I loved the chicken (well feather portion) with the fangirl... Oh Neji you sadistic feather gunky crap in hair-ness
Ally1313ally1313 on August 9th, 2006 01:42 pm (UTC)
Ya, I love this fic!
Thanks!
Hyuuga Tentenhyuugatenten on August 10th, 2006 01:43 am (UTC)
SQUEE ATTACK!
You know how religiously I review that story! DO YOU WANT ME TO POST THEM HERE! Well I'll X-post my Chapter five update!
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I was SO happy when you updated! This is one of my favorite stories at the moment, and when my Story Alert popped up, I squed... squeed? squee'd? squee-ed? I MADE A SQUEE! DAMNIT~!

Ok... eheh ^_^

On to the review!

I think Hiashi has a plan~n! At least I hope he does... sigh, although intelligent, we all know Hyuugan men, (yes I said HYUUGAN! Sort of like Floridians are people who live in Florida, Hyuugans are people who are Hyuugas! XXDD) can be a little tactless.

I love the whole clueless!Tenten and enthralled!Hyuugan-civilization interaction. The whole family LOVES her and she is clueless. She has that Naruto-ish vibe that draws people to her, yay!

Lol @ Tenten's confidence at pummeling fangirls!

LOL @ THE MASS AMOUNT OF GROUPIE HYUUGAN BOYS TENTEN HAS! Neji's is so put off by that, that it's adorable, and Hiashi knows this... I know he does, he went to bed smiling in the dark in the other chapter... eheh...

Neji argued with HIASHI, I think this is explanatory enough!

LOL @ The Hyuugan boy population trying to figure out where Neji and Tenten sparred. Can we say Stalker Society? YAY!

I love how that when responding to Hiashi separately they often remind him of each other!

THEY TRAIN IN THE FOREST OF DEATH! YAY THAT LINE WAS SO COOL!

Lol @ Hige, he is the metaphorical roadblock every developing relationship hates: The handsome interference.
Maybe this will cause little 15.98 year old Neji to step up to the bat, ne?

ROFLMAO @ Neji's Jelly Trap! OMG that was priceless. If we stop and analyze every traps set off in Konoha, it will probably be discovered that only 62% were caused by Naruto. The rest is divied up between Tenten and the other males of the rookie 9!

Hmm, the fangirls last assault. my intrest is piqued more that it was preaviously piqued in its piqued piqueness.

Waiting (im)patiently for an update!

LOVE
wingsover: bara_san jungle!neji saccharinesyrupwingsover on August 10th, 2006 08:19 am (UTC)
Re: SQUEE ATTACK!
Heh, my first x-posted review! I'll reply here cos it's easier'n LJ. Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you like the Hyuugan (you know, that's how I've written it sometimes meself! ^_^) reaction to Tenten. I don't read many fics where it happens that the Hyuugas like her, so I wanted to try it out rather than write another "Hyuugas hate her low-born self". Besides, interfering relatives can be just as annoying, hey?

I'm glad you like Hige. Heh. He's so pleased you called him handsome.

And I hope you find the next chapter suitably piquant.
burnishedvelvet: Wee! I'm Fangirling!!!burnishedvelvet on August 10th, 2006 09:58 am (UTC)
Wee! This was so fun. *is going to give a real review over on ff.net* ^__^

You know, I think Tenten just has a certain salt-of-the-earth, no-nonsense, girl-next-door-who-can-kick-your-ass-if-you-have-it-coming, ordinary home-body sort of charm that probably appeals greatly to men whose lives are filled with the pomp and prestige of a ridiculously talented, attractive aristocratic family. I get the feeling that even Hiashi has thought: "If I were 20 years younger..." at least once! XD

*seriously needs a Hiashi!Papa icon*
Hyuuga Tenten: t3h HYUUGA sexyhyuugatenten on August 10th, 2006 11:38 am (UTC)
I just HAD to reply to this!
Ok, so tottaly NOT the authoress here, but your comment kicks ass!

What boy WOULDNT like a beautiful girl who has an obsession with training, weapons, working hard, and beonming powerful, YET who is so chillaxed [YES CHILLAXED] that damn near the entire male population between the ages of 8 and 80 would be freaking jealous! None, am'am. The answer is none. XDDDDD

Ok, We might be drinking the same non-alcoholic Gai-juice, because your "20 years younger comment" crossed my mind. Seriously! And the closest Papa Hiashi icon I have is my "t3h HYUUGA s3xy" icon. And that's Neji. I HAVE TO GO FIND ONE NOW!
wingsover: bara_san jungle!neji saccharinesyrupwingsover on August 10th, 2006 03:15 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
What a yummy nice long review. Thaaaa~ank you! *purrs*

The cameos were indeed Heero Yuy from Gundam Wing - I actually had a fic planned wherein Heero discovers his long-lost mother's clan in the shinobi countries, and made up a long elaborate reason why the Hidden Villages and the elemental nations were left out of the Eve Wars, and why Gundams don't work there, and etc. etc. - but decided just to have him cameo now and then.

The other two main ones were Digimon Tamers, (cos I'm a dork) with the bakery and the bread, and Wolf's Rain with Hige. Hatori from Furuba is an extra. :)

I'm having SUCH fun writing Neji. Although I'm a little surprised by how well he's received by the reviewers. They point out things I'd never noticed before, like Neji=little kid when it comes to Tenten, and I'm flattered pink by your comment on him. Now I just worry that whatever I'm doing right I won't do in the next chapter (since I don't know what it is) and disappoint everyone. ^^;;

And yes, I love Hiashi now. You know how sometimes the older guy in the family totally charms the girl and she's like - to her date - "Why can't you be more like him?" (I have a great-uncle like that, he's a doll.) OMG, Neji fights off his cousins only to discover Hiashi is monopolizing Tenten's attention. ^____^ Don Hiashi! The benevolent godfather of the clan, with that old-world gentlemanly charm. I have GOT to use that quote later.

As for the reversal fic...you don't need to request it, I've been writing bits and pieces of it ever since I read your fic. ^_^

***
It was popularly assumed that Neji won every single one of the sparring matches he and Tenten daily engaged in.

This was a grave underestimation of Tenten.

It was true that Neji won MOST of the matches; however, she always gave him a good run for his money, and with her increasingly lethal skill and - more - her cunning for traps and her knowledge of his fighting style, she occasionally pulled off a win.

It looked like that was the case now, as Neji found himself pinned to the ground after a lightning-fast combo of strikes that ended with him flat and breathless on his back, Tenten straddling him with her knees at his hips, ankles locked to pin his legs, his wrists pinned to the ground by her hands, and altogether completely at her mercy.

"Yield..." Neji panted, somehow finding it difficult to breathe as Tenten's face - flushed with exercise, framed by unruly strands of sweat-damp brown that had escaped her loosened hair-bands - peered closely at his own.

Her eyes were very bright in the twilight...

"I...yield," he panted again, swallowing hard in an effort to funnel sufficient oxygen to his lungs. It seemed a futile endeavor; he was beginning to feel light-headed. As he breathed heavily he discovered he could catch the warm, sweaty, metallic-tainted - and utterly delicious - scent that was Tenten.

He licked his lips nervously. Tenten's eyes darted to the quick, flickering movement, and something seemed to darken in them. Neji felt even more light-headed, even more nervous, and every inch of skin where he could feel Tenten's weight felt feverishly hot.

He licked his lips again - and suddenly Tenten was kissing him, her mouth on his, and it was _her_ tongue flickering against his lips, and then between them, and then...and then...oh god...

He wasn't sure when she had pulled away, only that he didn't like that she had. She had a kunai between her teeth now, the ring-end clenched between her lips, and Neji felt a sudden irrational surge of jealousy for the weapon. Then she was bending her head, and tracing the tip of the kunai - razor-sharp as all her weapons were - down the front of his tunic in a single quick slash, and Neji shivered at the feel of the cold steel against his skin, of the cool evening air he was now exposed to, and at _her_... simply her...


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Excerpt. Rest of it will be done. Someday. ^_^ (God I hope none of my RL friends see that. No one with possible connections to my parents must ever!) I think that was the most explicit thing I've written on LJ.



burnishedvelvet: Renji LOLZburnishedvelvet on August 10th, 2006 06:36 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Wai! *is irrationally excited* Don't worry about rushing to get it done or anything. I just like throwing bunnies, you take such good care of them! ^__^ (And yeah, writing explicit material takes some getting used to at first... But once you're there, it's suprising easy. And far too much fun! XD And thank god for internet anonymity! My mother would have disowned me 10 times over if she ever became aware of the fact that I've written anything of the pornish variety! XD)

And it's nuts, I know, but my love for Hiashi--especially as a NejiTen catalyst--just keeps growing. Seriously, your fics just feed my obsession. XD But, oh man, that Don Hiashi comment last night... was crack. PURE crack. Glad it made you laugh, though!! ^___^ Dude, if you could actually make that Hyuuga!Godfather-crack quote work in your fic... Oh hon, I think I would probably just die. Seriously. XD

*resolves to make some sort of Don Hiashi icon today*
wingsoverwingsover on August 11th, 2006 03:50 am (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
We mutually feed each other! Because I loooved Hiashi calling Neji 'musuko' in your fic. And I seriously am going to use that line, it's too good to leave alone. ^_^

Heh, Don Hiashi. I know I've got a few pics of him somewhere...I'll go hunt them up.

And I'm glad you liked the ficlet. I suppose I should warn you - Neji will have to suffer a little before he gets some. I like to torture him.
Hyuuga Tenten: nejiten hearthyuugatenten on August 10th, 2006 08:19 pm (UTC)
I just HAD to reply to this! AGAIN!
THAT SNIPPIT KICKED ASS! LOL.

I'm finding many things kicking fictional booty lately, ne?

Poor traditional Hyuugan robes! XD! My summation? Tenten decided all obstuctions must go. NOW.

I love you! This just has to go in favorites! This whole post!
burnishedvelvet: ROCK! Envy & Gluttonyburnishedvelvet on August 10th, 2006 06:48 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Wow, thanks! Never gotten praise for a comment before. Yay! ^___^

Totally. (Everyone should drink Gai's Energy of Youth sport drink! It's packed with 8 essential vitamins and a daily allowance of crack to fuel the rabid plot-bunnies. LOL!) All those pauses when Hiashi looks down at her, you know he's learning a whole new way to appreciate Neji's woman (and yes, he already sees her as Neji's woman even though Neji has yet to have that epiphany! XD). He is totally aware that if he were 20 years younger, he'd so pay dues to be in the Hyuuga branch of the Tenten Fanclub for Boys.
Hyuuga Tentenhyuugatenten on August 10th, 2006 09:09 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
THATS IT! I have to Photoshop an energy drink now.Gai is going on it. Pronto. I might die if i dont!

I might make a Don Hiashi one too! XD!!!!

ROTFLMAOAIDOPA!!!!! [Rolling On The Floor Laughing My Ass Off And In Danger Of Possible Asphyxiation!] Paying dues! I FREAKING LOVE YOU! Plot bunnies have began humping and you supplied the carrots!

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[A gavel bangs in a damp, remote Branch House corridor]

Random Stuffed-Nasal Branch member: The Weekly Ten-Ten fan club is now in order! Any new items to add to the agenda?

Hyuuga Hige: I say we start planning the March 9th Birthday Bash now!

Nasal Boy: You say that every meeting Hige-kun, we'll address that after we sing the "Tenten FTW" Alma mater. Any NEW items?

Random Doe-Eyed Hyuuga: Ooh ooh! Me!

Nasal Boy: Yes, you with the shiny eyes.

Doe-Eyes: I KNOW WHERE SHE BUYS HER TOOTHPASTE!

[Collective gasp from the congregation]

Nasal-Boy: THIS [cuts eyes at Hige] is important, share with us, O large eyed one!

Doe-Eyes: At the grocery mart right next to Ichiraku Ramen! While i was staking her, she stopped in and bought just that! It has to be important!

Nasal boy: You have done us well. Sadly there is not enough time for the daily "Why We Love Tenten" poem recital-

[Crowd boos]

Nasal Boy: But we can bring up the master of affairs, Don Hyuuga!

[excessive clapping]

Hiashi, who is currently cloaked with Minnie Mouse bathrobe over his head in fears of being discovered, rises to the podium.

Don Hyuuga: Ok, it's time to pay dues! With these funds, we shall bless one of the most wonderful gifts upon her doorstep!-

[Cheers from the Peanut Gallery]

____________
The next morning Tenten wonders why there is eighty seven tubes of Gai-sensei's toothpaste on her doorstep...


I'm no writer.. but I couldn't resist!

wingsover: bara_san jungle!neji saccharinesyrupwingsover on August 11th, 2006 04:20 am (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
The Tenten Fanclub for Boys! Hyuuga branch! (what, are there other branches? Oh dammit, now I have a plotbunny whispering that Itachi would make a good, cracky member...) Oh man, I laughed so loud at the "minutes" of that meeting that I alarmed people in my house. The Tenten poem recital! The eight-seven tubes!

And the Gai-juice would be a bright fluorescent green, of course.

And Don Hyuuga in a bathrobe! Oh man! Neji, you have no idea what goes on in your house...

And I found one of my Hiashi pictures! It's hott, too. It's Hiashi AND Hizashi, proving why twincest is usually so so drool-worthy. Ouran Host Club and the Weasley twins, step aside! I had to edit out a horrified chibi-Neji though. ^_^

I wish I could read what they were saying...

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burnishedvelvet: Kaoru&Hikaru Sneakyburnishedvelvet on August 11th, 2006 05:54 am (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Mnngha... O_O Blushing Hizashi! And, and... Hyuuga twincuddle! *secretly wants to push 'em together and watch 'em kiss, twins are hot*
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Mnngha... O_O Blushing Hizashi! And, and... Hyuuga twincuddle! *secretly wants to push 'em together and watch 'em kiss, <i>twins</i> are hot* <_< >_> Why is my inner-monolgue so naughty?!

<i>Oh man! Neji, you have no idea what goes on in your house...</i>

Yus. It's always the quiet ones! And the Hyuugas are all pretty damn quiet, so... You know there's gotta be some weirdness there somewhere. (And yeah, I was thinking there might be a Nara branch and maybe an Abarame branch and, if the house still existed, an Uchiha branch... Tenten's easily one of the least annoying, most capable and adorable kunoichi of her rank. There just has to be a huge fanbase. ^__^)
burnishedvelvet: Fuckin' LJ!!!!burnishedvelvet on August 11th, 2006 05:55 am (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Stoopid LJ! Messed up my comment.
wingsoverwingsover on August 11th, 2006 12:05 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Icon LUB! ♥ For BOTH icons, btw.

Tenten's fanbase, IRL, is pretty huge considering the amount of screen-time she gets. And they're pretty devoted. SO. It should be equable in ninja-world since everything you've said is true. At the very least, Shikamaru would find her the least troublesome; Sasuke and Itachi would, being Uchihas, be impressed by her weapons-usage...

Heh, Uchiha Fanclub Branch.
Hyuuga Tentenhyuugatenten on August 11th, 2006 02:38 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
YAy! you come bearing good tides!

Lol! and OF COURSE theres more than the Hyuuga Branch. Theres also the Akatsuki Branch [go crack-y Itachi!], theirs the Suna Branch, hell theirs even a Aburame Branch.

Poor Tenten suspects nothing!
burnishedvelvet: Isshin Presentsburnishedvelvet on August 11th, 2006 03:07 am (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
Weee! I come bearing crappy cracky Hiashicons just for you (and anyone else who's likes my dumb joke!).



Okay, I know they're awful, sorry... I only spent a few minutes on 'em when the boss wasn't looking! XD Oh man, if my design professors could see these, they'd be completely afronted by their crappiness, LOL!
Hyuuga Tentenhyuugatenten on August 11th, 2006 02:36 pm (UTC)
Re: I just HAD to reply to this!
This took me all of 30 secs to BS. And yours dont suck, mine does!

It Says: "HIASHI the Hyuuga Don, Pimpin' the ladies from 8 to 80" on it. CRAcK!