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03 August 2006 @ 05:58 pm
Fic: Perhaps Fate  

Heya~!  

I've finally finished my chaptered fic, Perhaps Fate.  It's 10 chapters in total, including the epilogue. 

[ She could still smell the blood on her hands ] 

Gimme some feedback? Pretty please?

Cheers!

 
 
 
Dreams of Blue Skydreamsofbluesky on August 5th, 2006 12:11 pm (UTC)
Aiya - don't worry, it's not just you; quite a few people have been asking me about the ending. Well, basically, Tenten died somewhere between the eighth and ninth year. She went back to her job as a mercenary after leaving Konoha and was simply killed on one of her jobs. Isako being destroyed just means that the last physical commemoration of what happened between them was gone (unless you count their twins, of course.) The last two parts are from the first year they met again after she left Konoha for the last time, and no, Tenten telling Neji that she would be there next year was not a mockery of what really would happen in the future (her death and her NOT being there) - it was just me trying to show that while they were together, even though a happy ever after was not guaranteed, they still had hope for the future. =]

Um, the Chinese legend was a completely last minute thing. It was the festival a while ago and I read about celebrations in the papers. ^_^" It fit so much to their situation, and the part about the princess being from heaven and Tenten's name meaning 'heaven' was too much for me to resist.

Anyway, sry if my own ranting bored you. Thank you for such a nice review =] *huggles*
(Anonymous) on August 6th, 2006 07:45 am (UTC)
Your welcome. Ah. I get it now. Thanks *huggles back*