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30 June 2006 @ 01:54 am
Fanfic: Recognition  
Title: Recognition
Characters/Pairings: Neji and Tenten
Rating: Uh...I guess PG-13 (T for Teens :o)
Notes: Er...yeah, I haven't written in a while. Rusty? You bet! I was going to put it on ff.net, but apparently my computer hates me.
Summary: It all led to this moment, between these two. Upon first glance they were nothing. Upon understanding there was definitely something.

Disclaimer: I have nothing to do with the manga, Naruto, created by Kishimoto. I’ve only borrowed his characters and wish to go in depth with them. Specifically, Neji and Tenten.


by Blooming Cosmo



Her movements were awkward at best. And when they hit the bed, it only turned into a race for her. Limbs tangled, and the uncomfortable pull of hair was beginning to drive her partner mad.

She made quick work of removing their hitai-ates and then proceeded to boost herself up, hands gripping on to his shirt as she straddled him. He kept his mouth closed, eyes half lidded as he watched lazily. It was only when she moved up a bit further that he had spoken up in a hiss.

“Tenten, my r-” but his protests were soon stopped by her hand over his mouth.

She gave him an urgent look that caused him to settle down, relaxing back into the previous state he was in. He could only hear the footsteps now. All of his other senses were too shocked to comprehend anything except the woman that was currently on top of him.

She reaffirmed her hold of his stained shirt before giving a quick tug. Fingers soon came in contact with flesh, and she was on to her search while she used her other hand to tug at the top of her collar. The buttons were coming undone, perhaps even broken thanks to her haste. It was only a small price to pay.

Her pale pink shirt fell past her shoulders, the moon casting a soft glow over the bindings that were still wrapped around her slim frame.

“Trust me…”

It had become a saying he was now accustomed to through time. Her hand hovered over his heart feeling the soothing rhythm that only assured her further that this could work. She left the area, and began her search near his neck.

There it is.

It was getting louder outside. The slamming of various doors made her lower her head to the wound that tarnished his otherwise smooth pale skin. Her lips brushed against his neck softly, and she tested the area before beginning to suck on it strongly.

Her back arched in surprise when she heard the door to the room slam open, light entering the room before she could spit the bitter poison from her mouth.

The intruders could only see what was before them. The things in between were none of their concern.

A/N: Alright! So I haven’t written in a while. My intentions are to make this into a series of different events between the two before answering the question, “OH GOD WHAT’S GOING ON IN THIS CHAPTER!?!?!” even though it's pretty obvious. Last chapter will answer all questions that aren't so obvious.

...and no I haven't forgotten about the new layout and the winners for the contest. I love you all, you know that right. D: I am currently waiting for the sloganizer to say 'NejiTen, breakfast of champions!'....don't ask.
Current Mood: nervousnervous
Current Music: Dance, Dance- Fall Out Boy
Liz: Misuzu Gao Gao Favorite Flavor by walrusla_xhal on June 30th, 2006 06:55 am (UTC)
What an interesting beginning :o I look forward to reading the rest :D You don't seem rusty at all ♥

Screencap for me when it does? XD
Cosmo-san: [ power ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 02:13 pm (UTC)
Hahaa. Yeah. My fics tend not to make sense when I write them. XD Usually because I have no sense of direction. ^^; But thanks. XD

I shall. XD
wingsoverwingsover on June 30th, 2006 07:11 am (UTC)
YAAAY, BC fic! *dances* And what a hook! Now I'm going to be wondering and wondering what's the deal. What's Neji's "r-"? My ribbon? My rope? My raaaawr? ^_^

For some reason, I'm thinking that - as hott as this is - it's not actually a make-out session between the two, but a sort of "Okay, we need an alibi, let's pretend to be a teenage couple too involved with ourselves so we couldn't possibly be dangerous shinobi." I mean, yeah, the sucking out poison...

*bounces anxiously for the next part*
Ashleycrazedgirl622 on June 30th, 2006 07:58 am (UTC)
Aieeee, what a cliff hanger! I can't wait to read more, I wanna read more!!!!
Cosmo-san: Sasuke [ positions ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 02:18 pm (UTC)
Hopefully I can get more out soon. XDD
Cosmo-san: Kyo [ kitty senses ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 02:16 pm (UTC)
You're so clever. XD And thanks so much, maybe I didn't botch this up as badly as I thought I did. XDD Thankies. x3
typewriter glory: hyuuga nejishizuyuki on June 30th, 2006 11:27 am (UTC)
Keep writing XD It's hooky.

Cosmo-san: Tenten [ dreamer ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 02:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks. XD

If and when it says this, I will be ready to show to the community because I am that lame. Hohohohoho.
Dreams of Blue Skydreamsofbluesky on June 30th, 2006 02:15 pm (UTC)
Argh, you're evil leaving us hanging here with that cliffie. WHAT WERE YOU THINKING, WOMAN? This is riveting stuff! Hot beginning - I was like WHOA do we get smut from BC? But then the sucking out poison part added a whole new twist....I agree with wingsover, I'm guessing it's part of a ploy to take attention away from the fact that they are shinobi...right? Put more up soon, damnit!
Cosmo-san: nejiten [ lolz ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 02:24 pm (UTC)
Hahaha. It would be more evil if I were actually good at writing this stuff. XD I make things to obvious. :oo But I think everyone should get that. XDD I shall put more up hopefully soon.
Cat: Tenten [ wait for you ]light_flower on June 30th, 2006 02:58 pm (UTC)
Interesting beginning :O I need want more T__T This was a great thing to come home to <3 you are awesome, and you don't seem rusty to me at all. you have writing skillz :O *hides away her own*
Cosmo-san: NejiTen [ animated ]blooming_cosmo on June 30th, 2006 03:03 pm (UTC)
Thanks :O, even though it's not all that great. XD

D: No, don't hide your writing skillz. Awwwww! Your icon is so cute. :o
 la vie élastique: AYU - all that's promisingshuimei on June 30th, 2006 05:54 pm (UTC)
YOU!!! You devious girl, you! I command you to give us more post-haste! Loved it :)
Cosmo-san: NejiTen [ taming the beast ]blooming_cosmo on July 1st, 2006 04:12 am (UTC)
XDD I shall try and update as soon as possible. x3 ♥♥
burnishedvelvet: Jiraiya No Porn?!burnishedvelvet on July 1st, 2006 02:47 am (UTC)
It was only when she moved up a bit further that he had spoken up in a hiss.

Okay, I know this isn't what it seems. But, oh does my dirty mind wish it was. XD Well, this certainly snagged the old attention, can't wait for the rest of the fic! Great job. ^___^
wingsover: bara_san jungle!neji saccharinesyrupwingsover on July 1st, 2006 03:10 am (UTC)
I know, right? Still we can hope. besides, situations like this usually lead to more...interesting ones. ^______^
Cosmo-san: NejiTen [ dance ]blooming_cosmo on July 2nd, 2006 08:12 pm (UTC)
Hahaha, don't worry. XD A lot of people thought I was writing smut when I posted this. Maybe later, when nobody expects it lmao. Thankies for the comment. ^__^